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A short, ten page comic featuring Barriss Offee and Ahsoka Tano on their way to Pantora. The whole idea of this story is focused on mirialan modesty. Apparently, the mirialan clans that Luminara Unduli and Barriss Offee were born into practiced strict modesty to the point of even hiding their hair from the sight of others. To unveil their modesty would be a very powerful and intimate act that would put them in a very emotionally vulnerable situation. After such events as the Clone Wars episodes "Weapons Factory," "Brain Invaders" and whatever may have happened between Barriss and Ahsoka on Umbara, I imagine Barriss would let Ahsoka into her closest ring of trust and friendship. It's a simple subject for a comic, but I wanted this to be simple since it's my first comic. I didn't want to put too much into the story since I was learning and putting a lot of focus into the construction of the pages. For what it's worth, I hope you like "Reverie." Enjoy

Yay! This is finally done! I must say that I have WAY more respect for anyone who does comic art. Even if they are only a color or line artists and don't do all of it, this is still a ton of work! I'll never read another comic without understanding at least a glimpse of how much work was put into each and every panel. I can only imagine how much it must suck to drain a few months of your life into something that shows up on the store rack for just a couple bucks. Wow…

This comic is a test run for me. I've never done a comic before and I am honestly not sure if my 3D art is cut out for use in comics. That's your call and I'd really like to know what you think. Making this comic was certainly a learning experience and if I make another I already know a few things that I will do differently. I wanted to keep it simple for my trial run. Sorry, no lightsaber action here. If you would like to give me some constructive feedback, here are my questions that I would appreciate you answering:
Is my 3D art suitable for comics? Would you like to see more?
Are the speech bubble placements and fonts set up adequately? Is there anything you'd change about them?
Are the panels set up on each page in a manner that makes the story easy to follow? Is there anything you'd have me do differently with them? 

Massive thank you to Bobann for providing some great tips and pointers that made this learning process go a lot smoother.
Easter Egg courtesy of Raikoh-illust Thanks!
Ahsoka Tano, Barriss Offee and all related Star Wars content copyright Lucasarts/Disney.