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Fate dare not wake me from this reverie.
I will not return to where I cannot see.
It matters not by design nor chance.
Our souls embrace in this starlight dance.

Show me your wrath. Show me your sorrow.
Dive deep into darkness and dare me to follow.
A lighthouse beaming on thunderous shores,
Unflinching, unwavering, and forever yours.
For my angel. 
- CD
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SlingBlade87 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2018  Professional Writer
It's a very emotional and compelling piece.

You get a sense of the depth of the connection.
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AshleyLingy Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I love the line 'show me your wrath, show me your sorrow' especially, but this whole poem is an excellent little love poem. I feel the passion. Well done!
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Crimsonight Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much! That line was actually where I started writing the poem. So many love poems make promises of grandeur and gush over how wonderful things are in the moment. Don't get me wrong, I've certainly written my fair share of those, but what about when things aren't going well? What if your partner has guarded secrets that are difficult to share? To be there, unflinching in the face of hard truths and challenging times, is the sort of love I wish to express through my poetry these days. I'm so glad you like it, and thanks for the Watch! As a Star Wars fan artist, I so rarely get any feedback when I post my written works. :)
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Crimsonight Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you, truly! My gallery is a mess at the moment. I am reorganizing a lot. I have a folder though of originals, if you are interested. crimsonight.deviantart.com/gal…
I have only recently started posting original (not fandom oriented) written works again, and your encouragement makes me feel a lot more comfortable about sharing more. 
I will indubitably keep writing. I do not know how not to! ^_^
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AshleyLingy Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I don't know how to stop writing either. I'll check out your originals for sure! I'm glad I could make you feel more comfortable about sharing more. Also, I'd love your feedback on my other poems if you get a chance, i'm always looking for ways to improve or just knowing what I'm doing right. :)
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Crimsonight Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for so many comments! I have a wonderful stack of feedback! Thank you!!! I don't spend much time on DeviantART. I usually just post and then log out, but I'm going to slowly be going through your gallery. You're a fantastic writer!
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AshleyLingy Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Hey! I just wanted to say thank you for all the great feedback. I've been away from deviantART for a bit now and I'm overwhelmed by the amount of notifications lol. But I appreciate every comment. I just wrote another poem today if you'd like to check it out. You're a great writer too, I'll be keeping my eye out for you ;).
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Crimsonight Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Cheers! I know all too well how DeviantART can overwhelm someone returning from any amount of time away. That mountain of notifications never seems to get any smaller. No worries!
Thank you, and I'll be doing the same!
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Cascador Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nicely written. I thought of Edgar Allen Poe reading this.
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Crimsonight Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :)
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liunors Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... or evanescence singing that.
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